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Room 13943 ((unedited))

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Room 13943
A heavy breathing echoed thru the empty halls, Len's bear feet could be heard clapping against the cold stone ground a bit of blood left a trail showing his path. Len was clutching a wound on his side the revealing clothes had left this spot open for an attack Len had barely escaped but was now the lone survivor…or so he thought. As he was about to reach the door he heard a voice from behind "No one escapes here…" Len turned and saw the figure a single tear formed in his uncovered eye.
*1 am*
Len, Gakupo and Kaito had finished a concert and went to a bar afterwards people bought shots and drinks for them left and right. A particular person caught Len's interest he had brown hair, glasses and a very interesting smirk, Len wasn't sure but his teeth seemed sharp. The man claimed to be a teacher "You're a bit young to be in a bar don't you think?" Len giggled already a bit tipsy "I am not too young." He winked sticking his tongue out "I'm the innocent one I just have to look this way" The man laughed "Ah I see, I teach some children who are far younger then you though, I should have known better." Len laughed a bit at this awkwardness. Gakupo was distracted with a few women who asked him to perform one of his solo songs as they sang along with him. Kaito had his share of fans he was entertaining he was talking big and starting to try to get others to challenge him to pool.  The man spoke again to Len "Do you have a place to stay?" Len perked up a bit "Huh? Oh yeah a hotel" he smiled "The party might continue there if these two can keep it together." He giggled again; some of the other people in the bar began to take his attention away from the odd man. The man watched the three with a bizarre interest he looked to the bartender putting in another order of drinks for the three of them.
*3 am*
Len and the boys were starting to get a tad sluggish. Len had already passed out in a booth. Kaito and Gakupo had quickly placed themselves there along with him to keep him safe, but they were losing the fight against unconsciousness. The odd man held a small grin he spoke to the bartender "I think my clients have gotten themselves worn out, I'll get them off your hands." The bartender simply gave a nod; he was too busy with the crowd still remaining in the bar. The odd man walked over to the trio he smiled "Hey your manager called me over, I'll be your driver ok." Gakupo and Kaito were both a bit to buzzed to question this, Len wasn't awake to tell them….warn them that this man wasn't who he said he was. Gakupo picked up Len cradling him in his arms. Kaito got their things the odd man took them from him "I got it don't worry." He smirked and started out, Kaito and Gakupo followed upon reaching the car though they simply crawled in and went to sleep. The odd man grinned showing his sharp teeth "My unsightly prisoners, how foolish you are." He gave a small deep laugh before getting into the car and driving off.
*??*
Len woke first he frowned catching the scent of dried blood, a damp odor underlined it. He coughed and slowly stood up he found he was in a rather horrible looking room and more importantly was wearing different clothing. To him he looked like some sort of member of a harem, the clothes were quite revealing. He felt his skin crawl at the thought that someone had undressed him in his sleep and changed his clothes. He looked around noticing that Kaito and Gakupo were on opposite ends of the room they appeared to be chained to the wall by their wrists. Len noticed his was around his ankle as he shifted to get a better look some of the cloth brushed aside revealing a mirror and a note. He read the note first. "Rule 1: There is no escape. Rule 2: Be obedient. Rule 3: Don't trust anyone. Rule 4: The more pain you inflict on others the less will be placed on you. Rule 5: Enjoy." Len shuddered, 'what was this?' he thought. He grabbed the mirror and looked himself over he nearly screamed seeing what he thought were scars or tattoos. His neck was dotted with a peculiar diamond shape, his cheek held a rose and most bothersome his eyelid on his right eye had an odd barcode, under it was the numbers 39431. He felt himself slowly relax though, upon closer inspection all the markings were done with henna. He sat the mirror down and looked at his clothes he tore off a bit and covered his eye he couldn't stand seeing it. As he finished Kaito and Gakupo began to wake groaning. Kaito held his head "ugh, that is the last time I drink that much." Gakupo huffed "perhaps we should quit drinking all together." He sat up and began to frown, Len could see the alarm on his face but it slowly cooled "This could be bad." Kaito rubbed his eyes "What?" he looked around his heart leapt "what the hell?!" Len spoke up now "I'm not sure how we got here but I think things are going to get a lot worse….see if you have a mirror with you and a note." Gakupo and Kaito began to shift around it didn't take them long to realize that they were chained. Kaito shook his head "Why do I feel like this is going to turn into The Misery." Gakupo shook his head "Because I'm sure it is….the man who picked us up…" He shook his head "I didn't get his name or anything…but he has all our stuff. I bet no one realizes were even gone yet." He sighed. Kaito pulled on the chain a bit before giving up and searching for the mirror and note. Both of them manage to locate it inspecting themselves first. Gakupo sighed "I can't say I exactly hate this look." Kaito huffed "Speak for yourself, this looks like the sort of thing we'd end up wearing in some crazed fan girl's perverted dream."  Gakupo looked to him "I was speaking for myself." Kaito was silent for a moment then glared "Shut up." Len sighed "Please guys not now." Gakupo nodded "Sorry, I'm trying to stay rationale about all of this." Kaito shrugged "Well I have a hangover." Gakupo shook his head and began reading, Kaito did the same. After a few moments, Kaito crumbled up his note and tossed it away "This is insanity!"  Gakupo folded his and sat it down "That seems to be what this is. I can't say I'm too thrilled to find out what this whole arrangement with pain being dealt out is about." Kaito began to tug at his chain again. He stood up and began to move away from the wall it was obvious he had a rather short chain just enough to allow him to stand and maybe move about an arm's length away from the wall. Gakupo stood up. His chain rattled against the floor it was especially long it seemed long enough to get within reach of both Kaito and Len. "Quit making so much noise, whoever this man is, he might not know we are awake yet we need to see if we can break free." Kaito glared at him "Quit trying to be a leader Mr. Long Chain this is some terrifying stuff here I don't want to hang around and find out what happens!" he continued to struggle. Len stood up now "Guys please" Len felt himself get halted he glanced back and saw he had a medium length chain enough to get two arm lengths from the wall at most though. He frowned "Why do we all have different length chains?" Gakupo shook his head "There must be some reason." Kaito continued to pull and fight with the chain. Gakupo looked rather annoyed he managed to reach his leg out and give a rather decent kick to Kaito's hip. "Stop it!" Kaito was thrown off balance he hit the wall with a unpleasant force there was a small crack he cried out "You bastard!" Len tensed "Gakupo!" Gakupo stared at Kaito wide eyed "I…uh.." Kaito cradled his wounded finger; his pinky had been dislocated when he had tried to brace himself against the wall. "You did that on purpose!"  Kaito and Len suddenly cried out as the both fell to their knees; a shock was coming thru the chain. Gakupo tensed he felt a similar shock but only enough to sting. As suddenly as it started it stopped. Len was on his knees catching his breath. Kaito seemed too had gotten it the worse though since he was now in the middle of a coughing fit and was curled up trying to steady himself.
A voice spoke and slowly became visible in the barred window of the door. "There now I think you all understand how the rules work." The figure grinned in the dim light his sharp teeth were the easiest things to spot. Len focused harder picking up the tuffs or brown hair underneath the hood "You?!" Len trembled fearfully. The odd man laughed "I'm your new master Hiyama Kiyoteru." He grinned again "You must call me Master Kiyoteru." Gakupo glared at him "We will not! Let us out of here your twisted bastard!" Gakupo tensed and fell to the ground as a strong shock went thru his body. Hiyama laughed "Tsk tsk, I believe I just told you how you must address me." Gakupo was trembling a little from the shock. Len's eyes teared up "Please…m…master Kiyoteru, just let us out of here." Len's plea fell on deaf ears. Hiyama just laughed "Rule 1. Now then." The door unlocked and he carefully stepped inside placing an hour glass in the center of the room "This is how much time you all have left until I return again and reward who has been playing by the rules and punish those who don't. Ta." He laughed as he walked out, his laugh sounded insane. The door, their only freedom, slammed shut and relocked behind their 'master.' Len slowly broke down into tears. Kaito was managing to get back to a sitting position he popped his finger back in letting a small cry out. Gakupo turned onto his side trying to get his senses together.
*0:22*
Gakupo had managed to pull himself together as did Kaito and Len. Gakupo sat again the wall "we only have about a half an hour left….if none of us hurts the others then we all will get that strong shock again." Kaito was silent, standing and tapping his foot against the ground he seemed rather anxious. Len was sitting on the floor a bit away from the wall still "…There must be some way out though…." Silence overtook the room Kaito shook his head "We just have to play by his rules until we can find a way to break out." He closed his eyes "that is if we don't want to get hurt." Gakupo glared at him "I didn't take you as someone to be so easy to give in." Len lowered his head, so it begins again… Kaito pushed from the wall "I'm no giving in, what the hell is your idea if you are so smart?!" Gakupo "I don't know, why must I always have to solve all the problems, it would be nice if you could actually manage to help." Kaito's hands were slowly clentched into a fist he took on a rather serious expression "You want me to help so bad" he threw his non chained hand forward grabing some of Gakupo's long purple hair. He pulled back on it, Gakupo cried out "Let go!" Kaito pulled harder "No! I'm helping, I'm helping myself if you can't think of something better then this is the only way!" Len cried out "Stop please!" Within a blink of an eye a flash of shinny metal appeared between Kaito and Gakupo. Kaito cried out moved back and holding his arm a decent gash had been cut across Kaito's arm he shook letting out noises of suppressed pain. "Y…you cut me!"  Gakupo caught his breath sliding the sword back, It appearently had been hidden under his clothing. "If you won't listen to reason then I guess I will have to listen to your insanity and take part. Now pull yourself together" Len was trembling "Gakupo w-where did you get that weapon?" Gakupo frowned  "Len..." He  paused and shook his head "I knew it was on me the whole time, but I was hoping to keep it hidden to…" Suddenly a shot rung out. Gakupo froze as a wound on his arm began to dribble out blood. His eyes were wide as he slowly looked to Kaito, Kaito was holding a gun. "Guess this is why I have the short chain, and I guess I wasn't the only one with a weapon." He slowly grinned "And I guess we are even"  Gakupo's eyes flash with an intensity that Len had never seen before and within seconds the side of the room Gakupo and Kaito occupied decended into madness. Kaito fired wildly at Gakupo, Gakupo dodged the bullets and tried to get in close to swing his sword. Len cried out repeatedly for them to stop but again his pleas fell on deaf ears as blood began to coat the walls around the two of them. The last grain of sand fell to the bottom and Len felt the horrible shock, he collapsed. Gakupo fell as well having dealt the 2nd least amount of damage. Kaito stood over him triumphantly until he noticed Len's dismal situation. For a moment his mind started to return to him but soon their 'Master' had returned "Very good, very good indeed, you both put on quite the show" He glanced to Len and shook his head "You though, quite pathetic, hopefully that innocent attitude you play up hasn't really effected you." There was a click, 1, 2, several, Hiyama glanced to Kaito to see that he was attempting to shot him but was out of bullets. Hiyama laughed "Now you don't think I'd give anyone anything they could hurt me with do you?" Kaito suddenly cried out as a strong shock went thru him. Hiyama gave a sharp tooth grin "Rule 2." He began to take them out of the room individually with them uncocnious he tended their wounds gave them an Iv and a feeding tube before sending them back into the room. It wouldn't be fun if they died right away.
*0:12*
Len began to wake hearing the same horrible sounds he had heard before being knocked out by the shock. He opened his eyes to the horrifying sight of Gakupo and Kaito at each other's throats again. Len forced himself up and hurried over crying out "Stop, please stop!" His pleas again were ignored. Gakupo dealt a heavy gash to Kaito as a bullet pierce his shoulder. Len's eyes filled with the sight he felt his heart beating in his throat as his panted suddenly something felt like it snapped. Len cried out "STOP!!!!" His hands insticviely went to his hips where he had felt an odd pressure earlier his hands revealed throwing knives. He threw them out one flew into both men's hands. They both glared at him. Len got more knives ready. These people who once were his friends, were now his enemies. Chaos descended in the room now as occasional bullets were fired off and knives and swords clash about. Again their master would return and declare a winner before making them all go unconscious.
*??*
The horrible cycle from that hour repeated each time the men reawoke in the room. Hiyama watched on the cameras positioned in the room a cool grin plastered on his face and laughter occasionally break past his lips as he watched the anarchy. Though he was beginning to notice the most annoying pattern, Len the one he found himself most interested in appeared to be getting the least damage. "I've devoured their brains" Hiyama remarked to himself as his glasses reflected the screens "Yet it seems that some part of them still remains." He huffed a bit annoyed with this. He began to ponder what he should do to break this pattern. His thoughts were interrupted though when he saw all three men collapse to the floor. His body tensed "Has there been a death?" His voice was a mixture of excitement and fear. He didn't want the chaos to end yet. He hurried out of his viewing room and got downstairs the coated room had the sweetest perfume to him, blood, sweat, tears. To him these scents were a pure delight. He glanced over Gakupo and Kaito. Kaito appeared to be clutching a throwing knife in his chest while Gakupo appeared to be holding one in his neck. "He got the better of you to, I guess he isn't so sweet and innocent after all" he shook his head "pathetic." He started over to Len who appeared to clutching his stomach as if he had been shot. Hiyama shook his head "Did that useless blue haired diva really get you?" He reached out slowly for Len's hand when Len's head popped up he drew the dagger he had hidden in his hand and stabbed it into Hiyama's foot. Hiyama cired out but it was cut short as Len swept his foot up and kicked him across the face. Hiyama collapsed to the floor his glasses slide away. Len quickly scrambled searching his pockets trying to find the key to free himself. He had manage to regain himself a few fights ago and began to plan his escape, this was his plan come true, or atleast he hoped. He found the key and unlocked the shackle. He tossed the key to the bodies of Kaito and Gakupo. He winced as a bit of blood began to seep from his wound, he hadn't been faking entirely Kaito had managed a decent shot on him. He looked to their bodies his eyes filled with tear but he shook them away he had to escape this nightmare, it's what they would have wanted. He threw open the door and began to flee.
His bare feet could be heard clapping against the cold stone floors, as the trail of blood made him a easy prey to track. He reached the door to the outside, freedom but found it was locked. A voice spoke from behind him. His master, Hiyama was there a deranged look in his eyes "No one escapes here…" Len turned around as a tear started to fall from his eye. His thoughts turned to his fallen friends, they could have just trusted each other but instead they just doubted and injured each other. Hiyama held up the throwing dagger and got ready to bring it down on Len. Len flitched when he heard the contact of flesh and steal but as he slowly opened his eyes his eyes met with the steal blade sticking thru Hiyama's chest. Blood began to stain his clothing as his breath slowly began to leave him, he tried to speak but instead droped the dagger and began to fall to the floor. The sword was pulled out, Hiyama's hands went to the wound and shakily moved away he stared at the crimson stain and looked back to see Kaito and Gakupo standing behind him. Kaito pointed the gun at Hiyama's head Gakupo spoke "Rule.." Kiato finished "5" Kaito fired blood splattered on the three of them Hiyama's corpses fell over and silence fell in the house once more. After a moment Len lept over the body and quickly held onto both men "your alive! Your alive! I thought I killed you, I thought you were gone forever..i…I" both men held him "it's over" Gakupo assured. Kaito nodded "we need to get out of here though, and to a hospital." Len frowned "the door is locked…it needs a key code" He glanced to it with tear filled eyes. Gakupo moved from them both and looked it over "we need 5 numbers…did anyone see any numbers anywhere that might work." Kaito shook his head. Len was silent for a moment then perked up "Wait I did!" he removed the eye patch look." Gakupo nodded and entered the code in 13943 the door unlocked. The three of them quickly ran out to freedom.
*1 month later*
Len and the boys were already back in the studio recording a song reflecting their experience trapped in that hell hole. The producer stopped them "Take five boys." Len smiled "I'm going to get everyone drinks." Kaito and Gakupo nodded with a smile then began to discuss some things about the song. Len was relieved to have life back to normal. Their stay in the hospital was fortunately not very long, as creepy and sadistic as Hiyama had been he did a good job keeping them in decent health. It had turned out that Hiyama had been an obsessed fan since their start and this hadn't been his first time being so obsessed with celebrities before. Len shook his head, it was crazy to think that man actually managed to teach little children. Len reached the break room and pressed a button for a bottle of water then began to look over the other choices for Kaito and Gakupo. He didn't notice that a little figure had walked up behind him. "You will never be able to erase the cruelly mutilated memories…" Len tensed and spun around a little girl with brown hair in pigtails and a little red dress looked up at him. Len gave a small nervous laugh "Oh…hi, did you say something" She giggled "I was asking if you were with VanaN'ice." Len smiled relieved "Oh yeah I am, who are you?" She smiled "Kaai Yuki, I'm only nine years old." Her smile slowly started to change into a smirk. Len got a bit confused by this and started to feel a bit nervous. "W…well I'm going to get my drinks and get back to recording." He gave another nervous laugh and was about the press the button when he heard the door slam shut for the break room. He turned and suddenly felt the girl tackle him. The girl straddled his chest and grabbed him by the shirt so their eyes met. "Darling, you love me….Darling I love you." Len was about to speak but she put a finger to his lips "Silent." she smirked "YOU ARE MY HONEY!"
*end*
Just finished the story, this is entirely unedited but I wanted to get it up. If anyone wants to edit it for me before I do it later then I'd really appreciated it. ^_^ Thanks for reading. It's a bit graphic in the sense that I do make a lot of references to blood but i don't go into to much detail with it so i think the maturity level is ok. If anyone thinks I should change it let me know and I will.

Anyways this is based on the song room 13493 [link]

I was also thinking that in line with my other story this might be the incident that was made reference to the "deranged fan" that prompted Gakupo and Kaito to carry real weapons with them.

Anyways forgive the strangeness, misspellings, horrible grammar and all that like i mentioned it's unedited.
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cutefuzzybunnies123's avatar
i dont normaly read fan fics but i did this one and i have to say it was so good i couldent get my eyes away ... :) and i am addicted to this song as well :)